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Thursday, March 13, 2014

The windy house

WALT: use interesting adjectives in our story.


The Wind House…
One day Harry, Luke and Ethynn were roaming the land of Nowheresville on their motorbikes eating cupcakes and pancakes. They were driving on a dusty gravel road. The people were very odd. They were acting very weirdly. Suddenly they came to a halt, there was a big and very ugly house. Luke, Harry and Ethynn pulled onto the side of the road and stopped to look at the broken stoney murder house…..

Luke suggested that they should live there. The others said “NO!!”. It was to mouldy and ancient to live in of course. The house was unusually symmetrical. The roof was broken and the windows was shattered. Luke and Ethynn suggested we should go in, but harry jumped loudly in the doorway by the others surprise. Ethynn and Luke only just found out that there was a KEEP OUT sign. We still better go in said Luke. No, Yes, No, Yes fine. But first Ethynn called out to harry to come back, but it was no use…

Luke decided that he would have been killed by a murderer so he called the Nowheresville business fluffy happiness for people murdered. They waited and waited and waited but they didn’t come. Until dawn at least. “We should’ve just gone in” said Luke. “Oh yeeaah” said Ethynn. ‘’But its too cold, dark and scary’’. Said Ethynn. Mmm. agreed Luke.


Written by Luke, Harry E and Ethynn.

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